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         <p>
         To accept donations costs you absolutely nothing.
-        It costs you nothing to hold this donations for years before you bother to figure out how it works.
+        It costs you nothing to hold these donations for years before you bother to figure out how it works.
         You don't have to do anything now but create a wallet and put a public address up.
         </p>
 
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         </p>
 
         <p>
-        Cryptocurrency is the first every technology that secures digital scarcity and allows people to transact with one another digitally without any intermediary.
+        Cryptocurrency is the first ever technology that secures digital scarcity and allows people to transact with one another digitally without any intermediary.
         </p>
 
         <p>
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         It is clunky, old, sometimes expensive to transact with for small amounts, but it is consistent and is coming to function as "digital gold":
         a way of storing value over years.
         As the Bitcoin network comes to be used by more and more people, companies, countries and others to store value, it also increases the price, which obviously has made many people very rich.
-        Bitcoin will surge and crash in cycles, but the long-term trend is unambiguously up and more people store value on the network.
+        Bitcoin will surge and crash in cycles, but the long-term trend is unambiguously up as more people store value on the network.
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